One sunny day there was a very big crash on the ground. I waited till the next morning and in the morning I saw a flying sausa. I went to call my friend and we saw a green thing. It was as green as the leaves of the trees. I said let's go inside and look. My friend was a chicken. She was scared to come in so I went in myself and I saw…… ALIEN I quickly ran out to my friend but I forgot she was scared so she ran home when I told her.
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Kia ora Asmah. Thanks for sharing your writing. I enjoyed your simile. So did you collaborate with other people for this writing? I'd like to know how you did this effectively from different places.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Phil,
DeleteI see that you have asked if I have worked with other people for this. I didn't really work with other people for this we had to have our own for this activity
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Ka pai Asmah! I see that you have included a simile and a metaphor, excellent work! Why did you choose to write about an alien? Maybe you could include a picture of what an alien might look like.
ReplyDeleteKia ora miss leuii,
DeleteI chose to white about an alien because on the day I did this my sister mentioned flying sausa and I just thought about it and wrote about one.
I added the photo hope that was helpful.
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