Konichiwa Bloggers,
For the step it up of this activity we were asked to create a Tanka (Its is an ancient Japanese type of poetry). It is a Haiku poem but with 2 extra lines. I really like the poem I came up with. It has 5 lines, the first line has 5 syllabus, the second line has 7 syllabus, the third line has 5 syllabus, the fourth line has 7 syllabus and the last line has 7 syllabus.
My sister is saying the poem because I am losing my voice.
Here is the poem:
Here is the screencastify:
Thank you for visiting my blog post.
Bye.
Kia ora Asmah!
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team!
Firstly, AWESOME mahi completing so many activities!!! It is awesome to see! Make sure you also spend some time outdoors and with your whānau and friends!
I appreciate you saying ‘Konichiwa’ as your greetings considering this is an activity based on Japanese style poems!! Ka pai!
Nice job completing the ‘Step it Up’ version of the task!! Did you find doing this one easier because you also did the ‘Kick Start’ version?
I love the tanka poem you have created! I can imagine the scene as I am reading it. Great mahi on being able to transport your readers! You are very talented at writing poems, Asmah!
Keep up the awesome mahi!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Ka pai Asmah. Your poem looks great and sounds great. I hope your voice is better in time for you to read next week's poem. Have you visited this site to read and comment on some other students' poems?
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