Meri Kihirimete bloggers,
I did the step it up for poetry slam rua. It was about summer. I just wanna say there is a phrase saying fruit season, the fruits that I am talking about is like watermelon, strawberries, plums and peaches. Anyways I want to show you my poem!
Here is the screencastify:
Here is the poem:
Have a nice day.
Byeeeeeee
Mōrena Asmah,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte again, a blog commenter for Manaiakalani. Great job on the Poetry Slam Rua, Step it up activity!
Thank you for clarifying about the line ‘fruit - season’ this definitely helped me to understand what was going on! Summer season fruits are my favourites! Especially watermelon and strawberries, what are yours?
I noticed that you talked a bit about sunburn, it has been so hot this Summer that you can get sunburnt so easily!
Ngā Mihi Nui
Charlotte Visser
Summer Learning Journey
Ka pai Asmah. I really like the line 'skin burner.' It reminds me of Karolina's poem which you can see here. I also liked the way you performed your poem slowly and clearly. Ka pai!
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